Dare to Share
Dare I tell you my feelings?hidden from view inside,Ive held them for so longconcealed by face that lied,With smiles of shame to maskthe cracks across my heart,I yearn to let you knowThese feelings...
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sounds like a case of unrequited love to me.Move on no point in wasting time on an unreceptive audience
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Strong emotion and rhythm in this greeneaglz. I'm sure this story of the heart is one that many can relate to.Daniel
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I disagree on just moving on, sometimes its about having the courage to say what you feel anyway. The poem is about the frustration of relationships and although this poem is about the negative side...
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Hi, Paul, Sorry, I disagree. Not about the poem. It is spot on. When fear of reprisal or escalation makes someone hold their tongue, resentment builds within until it does a Mt. St. Helen. But, from...
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painful but beautiful - it takes strength to face ones own doppelgager.I have to agree with eva rather than Ivor!
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Well, looks like its more a personality thing rather than a m/f thing or perhaps a perception thing. Still, looks like my poem struck a chord with some. Eva, long time! And thanks for your comments....
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Dear Greeneaglz,A straightforward statement followed by your resolution.S2 says her mouth was well ahead of her ears. S1 says you never showed the pain and so she just might be unaware ofthe...
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JGDittier, very observant. I find the interaction between people fascinating and sometimes frustrating. Ron, im not sure about the coffee on the dress, may be a trip to the hospital if its really hot!...
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Greeneaglz such pain we always seem to take for granted and hurt those we love, here's hoping that love will break through!!!
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